Isisbridge

Isisbridge club

Posted: 08 Jun 2016


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rowing through the green

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River Cherwell at Christ Church Meadow
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14 comments - The latest ones
 Isisbridge
Isisbridge club
kayaks on the Cherwell
19 months ago.
 Howard Somerville
Howard Somerville club
Very nice.
14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
Good suggestion to "patch the blown highlight area",
but I'm not going to crop or darken the lefthand edge.
14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
Entirely up to you, but it would be a better picture if you were to heed Roy's advice, as I am oft entreated to. The relative lightness on the West side draws the eye away from the main subject, instead of allowing the tree and West bank to frame and hold the composition together, which it's perfectly placed to do..
14 months ago. Edited 14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
Load of twaddle. It's the lefthand tree that makes the picture.
14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
It does make the picture - disjointed and confusing to the eye.
14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
I agree that the patch of grass is overbright, but otherwise it's fine.

But if you insist on cropping it, why not move the boat at the same time,
and add a Shepperton swan to boot.
14 months ago. Edited 14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
Because the boat is fine where it is and a swan (like the light left-hand edge of the picture) would draw the eye away from the boat.
14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
Would you crop the tree in the second photo?

Ah, I see that you've already answered that question.
You want to crop the path, which is an integral part of the picture.
14 months ago. Edited 14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
No; I wouldn't crop it. But I've been told by someone with a better sense of composition than I that the eye must be drawn into a picture, and not led out of it, which over-light peripheral detail (especially when close to one side) tends to do.
14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
Yes, the path leads alongside the river.

Cherwell path
14 months ago. Edited 14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
Here the eye is led where you want it to be led. But I would (especially as there is so much of it) emphasise the dappled light on the path by darkening it and raising the contrast locally.
14 months ago. Edited 14 months ago.
Isisbridge club has replied to Howard Somerville club
Gentle dappled light along this riverside path.
14 months ago.
Howard Somerville club has replied to Isisbridge club
It will still be gentle.
14 months ago.

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