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TWILIGHT

TWILIGHT
on the new day twilight
lying down
with the dream interrupted by the last urination
simply
I feel good
numbed in body languor
faded
discounting the minutes left
to get up

///

ao lusco fusco do novo dia
deitado
com o sonho interrompido pela última micção
simplesmente
sinto-me bem
amodorrado no langor do corpo
esvaído
descontando os minutos que faltam
para me levantar

by Armando TABORDA, 2022

Robert Swanson, Jean Pierre Marcello, Frans Schols, aNNa schramm and 12 other people have particularly liked this photo


19 comments - The latest ones
 Armando Taborda
Armando Taborda club
Thanks for fave, Paolo Tanino, Nouchetdu38, Stephan Fey, Fred Fouarge, beapixa, homaris, aNNa schramm, and Frans Schols!
2 years ago. Edited 2 years ago.
 Ulrich John
Ulrich John club
Fantastic, Armando !
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Ulrich John club
Many thanks, John!
2 years ago.
 Annemarie
Annemarie club
beautiful mood
Happy Sunday:)
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Annemarie club
Many thanks, Annemarie! Kiss!
2 years ago.
 Malik Raoulda
Malik Raoulda club
Une atmosphère de rêve avec un texte correspondant.
Bonne et agréable journée dominicale.
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Malik Raoulda club
Deux fois merci, Malik! Bon dimanche!
2 years ago.
 vero
vero
magique Armando très bon dimanche bisous
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to vero
Merci, vero! Bisous!
2 years ago.
 cammino
cammino club
Eine geheimnisvolle Aufnahme, passend zum Text.
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to cammino club
Thanks twice, cammino!
2 years ago.
 Esther
Esther club
A unique approach to the challenge. Well done.
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Esther club
Well, maybe it's not unique, but at least it's one approach as you said, Esther! Thanks very much!
2 years ago.
 Gillian Everett
Gillian Everett club
A beautiful twilight
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Gillian Everett club
Thanks much, Gillian!
2 years ago.
 Xata
Xata club
Out of the box thinking Armando, fica a curiosidade sobre o pontinho branco: vela ou gaivota?
Ler o teu poema estando ainda na cama a ver as nuvens coloridas do dia a abrir com fundo sonoro de mar e vento foi o máximo, obrigada !
2 years ago. Edited 2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Xata club
...o pontinho branco é exactamente aquilo que puderes ver no teu sonho, Isabel...

beijo
2 years ago.
 Jean Pierre Marcello
Jean Pierre Marcello club
Gosto muito..a foto e o comentario. Obrigado
2 years ago.
Armando Taborda club has replied to Jean Pierre Marcello club
Obrigado eu, Jean-Pierre! Um abraço para ti, e um beijo à tua mulher, Isabel!
2 years ago.

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